writing about room7

Name: Genesis

16/3/2017

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Room 7 has been getting more lazier and messier. Recently our class has untidy and messy work that is up on the wall and our work is untidy and some of the rubbish is getting overfull and now people is just getting lazy and they just throw their rubbish under other people's desks and when the teacher says hows is this on one ano up to it. Now when you walk into room 7 it doesn't look like a classroom, it like vortexes with rubbish all over the place that because people are lazy.

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